Too much going on for one chapter. I don’t honestly get it? She stole a healing potion but the potion stole one of his senses making him blind?????????????? Like huh????? And she’s stupid for running out like that thinking she’d have a jolly way home to a family that hasn’t even bothered looking for her. I’m sorry but the inconsistencies are not mathing. There’s only so much I can turn my brain off for.
PranavJ
the potion didn’t make him blind the magical beast did and the rest of what you mentioned is just bad writing most likely.
StarCry
Too much going on for one chapter. I don’t honestly get it? She stole a healing potion but the potion stole one of his senses making him blind?????????????? Like huh????? And she’s stupid for running out like that thinking she’d have a jolly way home to a family that hasn’t even bothered looking for her. I’m sorry but the inconsistencies are not mathing. There’s only so much I can turn my brain off for.