Altruistic Warrior

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1. _𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝐻𝑒𝓁𝑒𝑒𝓃𝑒_

   SPOILER ALERT!!!!!!

   basically the only so called plot line is that the FL got cursed with an SS grade curse and has two options to get rid of it: one is purification in the church and that costs a lot of money (she doesnt have it) and second option is to get a very strong player to either kiss you, have se# with you or give you their blood and you will drink it

   September 14, 2024 at 11:36 am

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2. _𝐿𝒶𝒹𝓎 𝐻𝑒𝓁𝑒𝑒𝓃𝑒_

   @Marcela Holllyyyyy one of the longest comments on this website i have ever seen and its so detailed like ive been here for over a year and this is a very good summary. the story IS basically just for the scenes of two beautiful? people getting unholy.

   September 14, 2024 at 11:32 am

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3. Marcela

   Well I decided to summarize my utter disappointment here under story description. SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT SPOILER ALERT

   I truly came to like the settings when I started to read this one. I usually prefer historic with fantasy, or modern time without fantasy settings, and I guess this is not the first story set in a obvious game world, but the fact that she was not hit by bus to get there, but was originally from the world was interesting. Considering this as smut, I even liked the art (the giant anti-gravity breasts were off-putting, but I could digest it) the ml was like a Fabio from old harlequins – in a good way. There were bunch of very interesting characters all around and so I waited for some character/story/world development.
   HOWEVER
   Nothing came. At first I considered it a slow one, but when after 50 chapters of sex scenes (ok this is exaggerated, I think they started the relationship in like 20th chapter) there came another one with a lot of Kamasutra positioning and no thought coming across the section until the last panel showed THE END, I was flabbergasted. I do like the story to include all parts of relationship and se* Is a big part of couples life, so I do not dislike the scenes at all, but there should be some point in a story if you call it one instead of porn comic.
   IF YOU WANT TO READ THIS BEWARE- please do not call this a story but a wet dream diary of a 12 year old girl.
   Just when I was preparing that the main plot should finally unfold and twist us a bit, it was over and all the world and character building from the beginning of the manhwa was wasted,
   No interesting character gets the space to treat us with details of their life, including the ml, who showed a lot of promise at first. Even the FL is left without any dive in into her personal history, family or circumstance of the childhood. Everyone is made into a comic relief background for a couple which is paired just because they are hot and at the same place at the same time. Once they jump each others bones, the “story” is a mosaic of irrelevant and anticlimactic fight scenes and se* scenes. if you actually exclude the se* the rest falls apart. Now as for the se* scenes, even these are completely without any substance or fantasy. All the pillow talk is comprised into ohh and AHH (literally). There isn’t even any flirting, cute or really funny interactions between the two. The ml does not talk, has no character, pet peeves or gestures to be set apart – he is just pretty and standing there like a soulless doll. The FL is the same, without any flavour, within a span of hours, she is miraculously accepted into an elite group’s of warriors who were fighting off their fans and suckups till the very moment of her arrival, while all she did is an awkward smile. That’s all. And throughout the story she isn’t even able to upgrade herself with her own efforts.

   All in all, if you want a “story” you will not have to care about, this is it. You can even skip all the conversation bubbles- they lead nowhere and just enjoy the pretty eyed mannequin (ml) to your heart’s content while ignoring the FL as much as possible.

   September 6, 2024 at 12:48 am

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4. KittenBee

   I agree with @clayman7 the story is just a bunch of sex scenes without any sense, character development or anything. ML likes FL because she’s literally Mary Sue (he didn’t like any girl before). I will not give this manhwa any stars yet, MAYBE it will become better in the future although it’s unlikely.

   July 31, 2024 at 4:32 am

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5. Silvye

   I can’t remember where I stop

   May 28, 2024 at 7:57 pm

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6. sinned55

   I only came here because I thought it read Autistic Warrior. Kind of disappointed…

   May 2, 2024 at 7:32 am

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7. HitomiChi

   So like it 💕

   April 3, 2024 at 10:05 pm

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8. Natalie Morrow

   I guess you forgot about this manga 😔 🤨 there’s no new chapters since 11 days🤔😤

   March 17, 2024 at 7:00 pm

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9. waifumaterial

   Love it please update soon thank youuuu

   March 12, 2024 at 3:18 am

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10. simp4fantasyromc

    its really funny and hot totally recommend

    February 19, 2024 at 9:50 am

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11. leam101

    I like it. I think it’s good.

    February 17, 2024 at 4:41 am

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12. clayman7

    0/10 and heres why:

    1. FL is a shell of a husk of a Mary Sue damsel in distress. Klutz persona dialed up to 100 being an adventurer who trips over her own feet on flat ground

    2. The art is just lacking. Nobody ever expresses a single facial change

    3. Plot is mayonnaise level of bland and generic “omg I’m cursed and only the hot fluids of a ML can purify me”

    4. FL somehow gets attacked by a group of slimey bandits twice in 2 chapters and needs the ML to save her even though she’s also an adventurer?? But she can’t even fight an acorn monster so idk why she’s in this occupation

    Overall, no story no character development and art is just ok. It’s like reading an AI generated trashy manhwa

    January 24, 2024 at 9:46 pm

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