I really just can’t emphasize enough of how unlikable their sister and brother dynamic is and her character is also just super mid. It’s like they didn’t even try to make her unique in the slightest. Super talented✅ super obnoxious ✅ loves hitting the mc✅ gets angry at anything ✅
Makes sure you check all of these boxes to make a super bland female character and u can choose wether or not to make her hair pink,red,white, and or blue and make her come from a high standing clan within the series too. Once you complete those steps you have created the worst character ever and have proven you cannot write female characters at all.
This dynamic just sucks and idek why it’s so focused on relationships when he’s so young anyways. 2 different fiancés and like 3-4 different potential relationships when they have so much other things they could probably spend a week on. Imagine spending a week to only be this chapter of his drunk sister just saying let’s fight and they get halfway thru a fight. Who would’ve guessed she was going to beat him up. I definitely WOULDVE NEVER guessed and was super surprised. This is like waiting a week for a filler episode of anime. A complete waste of time and I bet I could’ve just skipped this chapter and still would’ve know what was going on because they likely talk abt everything you need to know in the next chapter and the only semi relevant thing in this chapter at all is the “cool” fighting. These martial artist throwing random jabs and kicks like kids but at least the art is fire and the only reason this would even get attention. I’m sure it’s not just me tired of the go back in time and get stronger trend and not because the trend is bad it’s because they like to focus on the mcs relationships so much when he’s a kid in most of these stories lol
The sister is the worst character by far. She sucks and she’s just a bully. They got cool sister and brother dynamics then we have this. This dynamic of a somewhat cool mc with the harem of literal children who are all multiple different played out tropes who all fall in love with him for reasons unknown.
CrispyBun
Bro graduates as yappalogy majors
Epiaco
Holy shit the yapping.. my god.. do you have a sister like this irl or something?
heavenlydemon999
I really just can’t emphasize enough of how unlikable their sister and brother dynamic is and her character is also just super mid. It’s like they didn’t even try to make her unique in the slightest. Super talented✅ super obnoxious ✅ loves hitting the mc✅ gets angry at anything ✅
Makes sure you check all of these boxes to make a super bland female character and u can choose wether or not to make her hair pink,red,white, and or blue and make her come from a high standing clan within the series too. Once you complete those steps you have created the worst character ever and have proven you cannot write female characters at all.
heavenlydemon999
This dynamic just sucks and idek why it’s so focused on relationships when he’s so young anyways. 2 different fiancés and like 3-4 different potential relationships when they have so much other things they could probably spend a week on. Imagine spending a week to only be this chapter of his drunk sister just saying let’s fight and they get halfway thru a fight. Who would’ve guessed she was going to beat him up. I definitely WOULDVE NEVER guessed and was super surprised. This is like waiting a week for a filler episode of anime. A complete waste of time and I bet I could’ve just skipped this chapter and still would’ve know what was going on because they likely talk abt everything you need to know in the next chapter and the only semi relevant thing in this chapter at all is the “cool” fighting. These martial artist throwing random jabs and kicks like kids but at least the art is fire and the only reason this would even get attention. I’m sure it’s not just me tired of the go back in time and get stronger trend and not because the trend is bad it’s because they like to focus on the mcs relationships so much when he’s a kid in most of these stories lol
heavenlydemon999
The sister is the worst character by far. She sucks and she’s just a bully. They got cool sister and brother dynamics then we have this. This dynamic of a somewhat cool mc with the harem of literal children who are all multiple different played out tropes who all fall in love with him for reasons unknown.