Good chapter. Only criticism I have is that MC and the director stood there watching while the Great Conqueror attacked the snake. They aren’t taking this seriously enough. They should’ve all attacked at the same time and overwhelmed it. Then it would’ve focused on them, the strongest combatants, and the Hyouka squad would be free to deal some damage with no aggro on them. This is just me being a nitpicker though. People make mistakes, no one’s perfect.
Poofe Ei
Good chapter. Only criticism I have is that MC and the director stood there watching while the Great Conqueror attacked the snake. They aren’t taking this seriously enough. They should’ve all attacked at the same time and overwhelmed it. Then it would’ve focused on them, the strongest combatants, and the Hyouka squad would be free to deal some damage with no aggro on them. This is just me being a nitpicker though. People make mistakes, no one’s perfect.