Do All Mothers in Childcare Novels have to Die?

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1. KBBBBB

   Dropped at ch37. The story had a lot potential and I looked forward to the updates, but I just don’t like how inconsistently FL is written. We were told she was smart but that’s constantly proven otherwise. I mentioned before that I don’t mind a dumb FL at all, but delivering expectations is important in writing and the author just didn’t execute. She knows the future and constantly maintains she doesn’t want to die but isn’t proactive in making that happen imo. She makes a lot of assumptions and at times they are correct but it’s strange in how she can guess half the picture then come to conclusions that don’t line up with what she’s correctly put together. Someone said the ML doesn’t communicate causing her to need to guess but I just don’t think that’s fully true. He told her he’d protect and made every effort yet doesn’t trust him for reasons I cannot understand. I feel it’s very easy to understand MLs actions, especially if she has the brainpower we’ve seen her (inconsistently) have. I think everyone is consistent in character but the MC and that’s frustrating. The author does not have the writing chops and wants classic misunderstanding and miscommunication (and etc) tropes at the expense of the MCs character.

   May 28, 2025 at 8:47 pm

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2. milliecrepe

   Good plot potential but weak FL. Read up to ch37 and I’m disappointed in her.

   May 22, 2025 at 5:33 pm

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3. DearReader

   I drop this for so long cause it’s boring 😞 I came again to check if anything changes???

   May 21, 2025 at 8:03 pm

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4. Kyliaren

   Idk…I got to ch 10 and there’s literally still no chemistry between FL and ML. FL’s character is also confusing. In example, FL seems to know her fate, is aware she’s in a novel and knows that ML’s her future husband who will be the father of the real FL. Yet with no mention of ML having been around a bunch of women, she randomly assumes he’s a playboy? Not only that, she attempted to run away from the beginning but when she is at the palace, she states she doesn’t want to leave the palace. It feels like the author has no idea what they’re doing. The storytelling is horrible but the art is nice. A pity, really. I’m dropping this.

   May 16, 2025 at 12:16 pm

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5. Blair_boo

   33

   April 16, 2025 at 6:34 pm

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6. Blair_boo

   31

   April 7, 2025 at 9:09 pm

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7. hoot tempered

   Mmm a slow romance but i honestly like It ,and love the art ,but It’s a okay reading

   March 30, 2025 at 12:32 am

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8. ManhwaMancer

   FL’s not strong. She should have a character development.

   March 21, 2025 at 9:36 am

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9. zannendesu

   For me, it doesnt have potential at all, just a story about bantering between FL and ML, FL doesnt want to concieved a child. You have to wait u til chapter 100+ to wait they has a child.
   I thought it was a wholesome story about a mother that can surpass anything even a fate. But its not, its just typical romcom between a couple

   February 4, 2025 at 6:57 pm

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10. TwilightBennet

    I cant find it 🥲

    February 3, 2025 at 5:33 am

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11. Gabimaru

    Y’all read this on “snow machine tr*nslation” instead

    January 23, 2025 at 2:13 pm

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12. xxboylove

    Had potential

    January 19, 2025 at 6:10 pm

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13. Sweetvity

    Great story but the quality makes my eyes hurt😅

    January 19, 2025 at 11:38 am

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14. RomanceGlutton

    The quality is down because it came from luacomics and they have been doing this so you are forced to buy the chapters

    January 19, 2025 at 1:43 am

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15. Draven9123

    Why are all chapters I read now a day’s got bad quality is it just or is this happening to everyone?

    January 18, 2025 at 10:26 pm

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16. Emhola

    The quality of the latest chapters are very bad – like pixelated

    January 18, 2025 at 8:05 pm

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17. Pochi meow

    Awww rreLly fresh n cute dynamic

    January 18, 2025 at 6:27 pm

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