good god, there’s far too much unnecessary dialogue. What’s this about it being against the law to raid a casino? BS. Its obvious that the casinos were scamming people. They should have known better. Furthermore, the farmer girl thought to herself that she was about to get hit? Come on now. That bubble was absolutely unnecessary. Its also cringe how MC just HAPPENED to see the farmer girl and she just HAPPENED to be in a situation to save her. The plot armor was heavy in that scene. I had high hopes for this story, but with each chapter, the quality continues to drop.
MrBojingo
good god, there’s far too much unnecessary dialogue. What’s this about it being against the law to raid a casino? BS. Its obvious that the casinos were scamming people. They should have known better. Furthermore, the farmer girl thought to herself that she was about to get hit? Come on now. That bubble was absolutely unnecessary. Its also cringe how MC just HAPPENED to see the farmer girl and she just HAPPENED to be in a situation to save her. The plot armor was heavy in that scene. I had high hopes for this story, but with each chapter, the quality continues to drop.