Stirring our emotions on FL’s sufferings was stolen by ML too much pov.. This story is what I am looking for but the messy plotting ruined the supposedly good story. The art is fine for me just the plotting. This could have been great. I love his cousin how he treats her like his real sister.
The time skipped after 6 yrs is too much. I wanted to see how FL grew up with her relatives a 1-2 chapter will do. The pov of ML was too many chapters stealing the drama spotlight of FL. Haha. I was alreadyy hating the ML. It was revealed too early.
TrishaJ
Stirring our emotions on FL’s sufferings was stolen by ML too much pov.. This story is what I am looking for but the messy plotting ruined the supposedly good story. The art is fine for me just the plotting. This could have been great. I love his cousin how he treats her like his real sister.
TrishaJ
The time skipped after 6 yrs is too much. I wanted to see how FL grew up with her relatives a 1-2 chapter will do. The pov of ML was too many chapters stealing the drama spotlight of FL. Haha. I was alreadyy hating the ML. It was revealed too early.
Rain0808
I forgot there was a time leap thought I was reading something else lol