this is so frustrating to read, i was baited by the adult scenes lol but the whole story itself is so messy and all over the place. when a writer is a good story teller it really makes a difference. sadly this one is just so badly written and none of the characters are likeable
kanaria
this is so frustrating to read, i was baited by the adult scenes lol but the whole story itself is so messy and all over the place. when a writer is a good story teller it really makes a difference. sadly this one is just so badly written and none of the characters are likeable
xxboylove
A mess