Your entitled to your own opinion, but if you don’t like it you could stop reading it. Your probably going to continue reading it anyways though. In some mahua and manhwa the story isn’t always written that well or parts of it are lacking, but I still read them anyways. I hope you’ll stay fir this one because I’m actively quite enjoying it
Excuse you truthspeaker people are on this site to read so you have no right to criticise the author write your own f*cking book then you’ll know how hard it is to write one 🖕🏿
The story is better now. No matter how OP the FL is, just randomly having her attack and beat up people one after another is just poor writing and doesn’t leave any room for suspense. Who even is the FL? it mentions that she was an assassin? yet she could do summons? So she comes from the future`? And that future is also a fantasy world? In other words, the FL comes from a world that is not relatable because it is just as magical as the one we are shown now? Worse, we are told nothing of this world and we know nothing about her… so having her suddenly take possession of another persons body does nothing for the story. It is sad really. We were shown that the original Shauan was really cute as a child and instead of giving us this crap assassin story, they could have had Shauan slowly start remembering some minor things from a past life… or suddenly gain a power or something. I know this has also been done to death, but considering that the prince actually did like the real Shauan, having this boring assassin steal her body is just sad.
Bad Karma
psychopaths!!!!
Jorxbent
It seems like he can see her soul. I wonder if it’s some kind of power or ability he has?
Jorxbent
*for *actually
Jorxbent
Your entitled to your own opinion, but if you don’t like it you could stop reading it. Your probably going to continue reading it anyways though. In some mahua and manhwa the story isn’t always written that well or parts of it are lacking, but I still read them anyways. I hope you’ll stay fir this one because I’m actively quite enjoying it
Moons1
Excuse you truthspeaker people are on this site to read so you have no right to criticise the author write your own f*cking book then you’ll know how hard it is to write one 🖕🏿
TruthSpeaker
The story is better now. No matter how OP the FL is, just randomly having her attack and beat up people one after another is just poor writing and doesn’t leave any room for suspense. Who even is the FL? it mentions that she was an assassin? yet she could do summons? So she comes from the future`? And that future is also a fantasy world? In other words, the FL comes from a world that is not relatable because it is just as magical as the one we are shown now? Worse, we are told nothing of this world and we know nothing about her… so having her suddenly take possession of another persons body does nothing for the story. It is sad really. We were shown that the original Shauan was really cute as a child and instead of giving us this crap assassin story, they could have had Shauan slowly start remembering some minor things from a past life… or suddenly gain a power or something. I know this has also been done to death, but considering that the prince actually did like the real Shauan, having this boring assassin steal her body is just sad.
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Oh my oh my ???