I have certain things that I don’t like about this, it has potential, but it’s already giving me a few things that I don’t like.
1. First of all, you don’t have to narrate everything we can kind of understand from. What’s happening? You don’t have to narrate, oh, yeah, he’s doing this right now when we can see it.
2. Who just stands behind the person that’s trying to save them, not getting to safety and thinking, oh, he’s gonna notice as you literally made a shield that looks like a giant lightbulb that you could see from a distance, who wouldnt see it it’s a dragon.
3. And even knowing that you are comrade is fighting to save you, you’re just gonna stand there and not trying to come up with a solution, like oh commander slowly, but surely search for safety while I put this shield as a distraction for the dragon bro.
Himebell
I have certain things that I don’t like about this, it has potential, but it’s already giving me a few things that I don’t like.
1. First of all, you don’t have to narrate everything we can kind of understand from. What’s happening? You don’t have to narrate, oh, yeah, he’s doing this right now when we can see it.
2. Who just stands behind the person that’s trying to save them, not getting to safety and thinking, oh, he’s gonna notice as you literally made a shield that looks like a giant lightbulb that you could see from a distance, who wouldnt see it it’s a dragon.
3. And even knowing that you are comrade is fighting to save you, you’re just gonna stand there and not trying to come up with a solution, like oh commander slowly, but surely search for safety while I put this shield as a distraction for the dragon bro.