Should I feel something? Everything is written so badly.
FL forgot that she hates the guild leader for valid reasons anyway… There are no clear reason for her goals and she also all the time forgets that she was another world awhile ago.
Like our FL, we as readers also don’t really know ML so random sympathy/empathy what ever is hard to feel towards him.
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Guideverse can be used well emotionally, and you often feel the stakes how important guiding is, but this story fails to use any strong writing points it has given to itself. From female lead’s backstory to the verse it’s using. Failing at everything.
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I wonder… Is there some kinda disease or rule that all the straight guideverse stories have to be written badly?
TheSolLution
This story is so.. I’ll be honest it sucks. I’m only reading cuz the ml is hot tbh and even then I can barely keep reading like cmon..
Feyren
Should I feel something? Everything is written so badly.
FL forgot that she hates the guild leader for valid reasons anyway… There are no clear reason for her goals and she also all the time forgets that she was another world awhile ago.
Like our FL, we as readers also don’t really know ML so random sympathy/empathy what ever is hard to feel towards him.
.
Guideverse can be used well emotionally, and you often feel the stakes how important guiding is, but this story fails to use any strong writing points it has given to itself. From female lead’s backstory to the verse it’s using. Failing at everything.
.
I wonder… Is there some kinda disease or rule that all the straight guideverse stories have to be written badly?