I’m not sure what the complaints are for. I think she’s doing very good in trying to change what she can. It’s pretty realistic so far. She literally had to plead with her brother on her knees not to kill her and he sent her to a place she’s least likely to thrive/survive for long. What makes you think he’s going to listen to her about knowing the future to save his wife and kids? What makes you think he won’t see her even further as threat and kill or lock her up if he does believe her? Her goal is to save her husband. I highly doubt approaching her brother who would kill her at any point would fix a single thing. Also the duke barely has enough to run his territory. How in the world is he gonna break away from a kingdom? Think again, kids.
Breaking away would result in the same massacre, just a bit sooner. Look into the issues between English and French rulers from 1066 till the rule the queen “bloody” Mary, and you will see that no king will easily let go of even a scrap of their land.
Girl, why don’t you try to get into favor with your brother by saving his wife and kids? You could warn him of the circumstances of their demise in advance and perhaps it can be stopped. In return ask for your life and the lives of your descendants. You either do that or you better start utilizing the knowledge of the future to get money and resources quickly. I hope the story gets better, but I am kind of bored with it right now. I’ll give it a few more chapters to see if it gets better…
KBBBBB
I’m not sure what the complaints are for. I think she’s doing very good in trying to change what she can. It’s pretty realistic so far. She literally had to plead with her brother on her knees not to kill her and he sent her to a place she’s least likely to thrive/survive for long. What makes you think he’s going to listen to her about knowing the future to save his wife and kids? What makes you think he won’t see her even further as threat and kill or lock her up if he does believe her? Her goal is to save her husband. I highly doubt approaching her brother who would kill her at any point would fix a single thing. Also the duke barely has enough to run his territory. How in the world is he gonna break away from a kingdom? Think again, kids.
Marcela
Breaking away would result in the same massacre, just a bit sooner. Look into the issues between English and French rulers from 1066 till the rule the queen “bloody” Mary, and you will see that no king will easily let go of even a scrap of their land.
wwillia99
She should have the duke break away from the kingdom at this point.
Starberry
Ugh, this is why it’s so much easier to read stories with OP ML or OP FLs.
The Lurker
Girl, why don’t you try to get into favor with your brother by saving his wife and kids? You could warn him of the circumstances of their demise in advance and perhaps it can be stopped. In return ask for your life and the lives of your descendants. You either do that or you better start utilizing the knowledge of the future to get money and resources quickly. I hope the story gets better, but I am kind of bored with it right now. I’ll give it a few more chapters to see if it gets better…