I mean, NONE in their right mind would get horny every time she thinks of her “killer”. I abhore stories absolving the characters of their guilt with the excuse of misunderstandings or ” you were dull but now you are fanscinating, so basically its your fault for not interesting me enough in first timeline”. Also troupe of only main character knowing future or past life is so old, there is little to salvage its story. Taking away peoples actions negates usually half of their chacater, its hard to make it interesting with so little. Author, please get more original. This is too borong!
Marcela
I mean, NONE in their right mind would get horny every time she thinks of her “killer”. I abhore stories absolving the characters of their guilt with the excuse of misunderstandings or ” you were dull but now you are fanscinating, so basically its your fault for not interesting me enough in first timeline”. Also troupe of only main character knowing future or past life is so old, there is little to salvage its story. Taking away peoples actions negates usually half of their chacater, its hard to make it interesting with so little. Author, please get more original. This is too borong!
KittenBee
The whole thing doesn’t have any sense, she’s a pushover and he’s, ehh, nothing special. I guess I just want to see who’s culprit.
Purplebritt
Why doesn’t she just tell him what she witnessed? She’s a priestess so it wouldn’t be unheard of for her to have some precognition ability.
Osariso
Drope.