Ig we still have to wait for the upcoming chapters, there might be a slow flashbacks. Sometimes flashbacks are slowly given unlike those stories that it’s given already from the start.
Like… The crown prince was all I’ma get that Vita dude… He personally tortures her, but then disappears…
The art gives zero feeling of desperation or suffering that she surely must be feeling, you know it must hurt like a mofo yet her face rarely gives any indication…
The dad comes out of nowhere, like where’s the connect the dots chain of events? Instead he just shows up lol…
Her crafting weapons… She’s a young girl but seems clueless about her sword being special Im sure she was taught by her dad… Not sure why he would teach her but hey… That happened, it be nice to have something that gives meaning to how she crafted that sword… Instead it’s there because…
Louie… Now I get that she left because she may have thought she would tarnish the Duke, but it seemed that the Duke knew Louie’s dad… So…like… Backstory woulda been nice… How he came to be … Her flashback didn’t explain much…
So who was Louie’s dad? It’s all a bit messy, it only needed a more detailed explanation.
Now if I saw my dad’s pic and he was dressed like that I’d assume that dad is well off so why did he ditch us… Was he married? He have kids? Why did Louie’s dad know about the Duke? Was he sent with her mother to help protect her? But why? From what is implied he didn’t know she was preggers but how can that be when he came all that way to see her…
Which brings us back to the earlier question how did the Duke know?, How did he piece together all these things to come find her? Was it the swords that made him think something? Was it the crown prince?
It would be nice if more gaps were filled coz it just appears makes it feel disconnected
Yangyang
Loui so cute ?
myra
louie sooo cute my cutiepie!!!
alexxa13
Ig we still have to wait for the upcoming chapters, there might be a slow flashbacks. Sometimes flashbacks are slowly given unlike those stories that it’s given already from the start.
Chaku
Also… Why hide her pregnancy from the Duke but happily share with her fam who the MCs dad is… I mean…woah…
Chaku
The only trouble with this manga are the gaps
Like… The crown prince was all I’ma get that Vita dude… He personally tortures her, but then disappears…
The art gives zero feeling of desperation or suffering that she surely must be feeling, you know it must hurt like a mofo yet her face rarely gives any indication…
The dad comes out of nowhere, like where’s the connect the dots chain of events? Instead he just shows up lol…
Her crafting weapons… She’s a young girl but seems clueless about her sword being special Im sure she was taught by her dad… Not sure why he would teach her but hey… That happened, it be nice to have something that gives meaning to how she crafted that sword… Instead it’s there because…
Louie… Now I get that she left because she may have thought she would tarnish the Duke, but it seemed that the Duke knew Louie’s dad… So…like… Backstory woulda been nice… How he came to be … Her flashback didn’t explain much…
So who was Louie’s dad? It’s all a bit messy, it only needed a more detailed explanation.
Now if I saw my dad’s pic and he was dressed like that I’d assume that dad is well off so why did he ditch us… Was he married? He have kids? Why did Louie’s dad know about the Duke? Was he sent with her mother to help protect her? But why? From what is implied he didn’t know she was preggers but how can that be when he came all that way to see her…
Which brings us back to the earlier question how did the Duke know?, How did he piece together all these things to come find her? Was it the swords that made him think something? Was it the crown prince?
It would be nice if more gaps were filled coz it just appears makes it feel disconnected
BhevsNJ
Kyaaa my heart.. Louie so cute ????