Aaaaaand to I’m done. Can’t read more. Too much incompetence in a few chapters. No real training, didnt even talk about the abilities or capabilities of each member yet tossed em all into danger. Didn’t even talk about what they would face or anything. A month of Theory glossed over for no reason. Why even mention it. Just remove it and state they will be divided in teams they like and train vs monsters and it would be fine. But… No. Instead we made is into slop. Big pass.
SpintFX
Aaaaaand to I’m done. Can’t read more. Too much incompetence in a few chapters. No real training, didnt even talk about the abilities or capabilities of each member yet tossed em all into danger. Didn’t even talk about what they would face or anything. A month of Theory glossed over for no reason. Why even mention it. Just remove it and state they will be divided in teams they like and train vs monsters and it would be fine. But… No. Instead we made is into slop. Big pass.