There was the potential for a better story between the title and opening premise. She should have been the friend for an actual heroine, not the evil protagonist who wins. It should have been that her memories of her past life started to come back while writing about it and she tries to alter. Initially making minor changes that don’t do much, but eventually builds until she can actually save her heroine friend.
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And maybe to give us a reason to follow the MC instead of the heroine, the changes in the past life somehow start to affect her present life. It could be that the heroine’s first life was as one of her dead family members who can alter the MC’s present timeline in tern.
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I don’t know, it just feels like there could have been more done with the MC in the modern time for her second life instead of just regressing her back to the first one for a typical revenge plot…
TheSecretLover
There was the potential for a better story between the title and opening premise. She should have been the friend for an actual heroine, not the evil protagonist who wins. It should have been that her memories of her past life started to come back while writing about it and she tries to alter. Initially making minor changes that don’t do much, but eventually builds until she can actually save her heroine friend.
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And maybe to give us a reason to follow the MC instead of the heroine, the changes in the past life somehow start to affect her present life. It could be that the heroine’s first life was as one of her dead family members who can alter the MC’s present timeline in tern.
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I don’t know, it just feels like there could have been more done with the MC in the modern time for her second life instead of just regressing her back to the first one for a typical revenge plot…
Belldandy
It’s interesting that her second life was the one in the modern world