So it wasn’t a parody… that’s depressing. The past doesn’t make any sense though. There is no way in hell that any 7 year old would be that crafty and patient. If Adeline herself isn’t a reincarnation or a reborn magician or a demon then it just doesn’t make any sense. Being jealous or whatever isn’t enough for people to act like that… I mean that sort of thing only happens in really REALLY poorly written stories. People said that this seemed to be a generic story… but even if it is, even then you have to at least have it make a LITTLE bit of sense. Even in “the villainess turns the hourglass” (trash story), at least the twist was that the author wanted to see if he could trick people into cheering for the absolute most horrid trash FL there was. He succeeded. But in this story the actual antagonist seems to not only be evil… it seems to be mindbogglingly stupid chaotic evil that does evil things simply for the lulz. Sure I mean you could write a story like that… but i you created such a character then any “revenge” would fall short because the antagonist would simply be too much of a lunatic and psycho to actually be affected by any normal revenge. IN fact, a psycho character like that would simply laugh even if you tortured it and killed people that it had seemingly cared about… because it would just be evil. I mean, sure if you want to write that kind of story it could actually be pretty interesting if we are shown Winsty doing all these elaborate plans to make Adelina suffer only for the antagonist to turn the tables on her and be even more evil. Not that it is going to happen… having read this second chapter it seems more likely that it is all just because the writer is incompetent.
If she was then she would be a complete psycho that would make characters such as Hannibal Lector” seem tame… any and all planned revenge against her would fall short and blow up in Winsty’s face… and that alone would be refreshing since the whole tired “lets get revenge on the antagonist” plot would be subverted. But no… having only read these first two chapters my guess it is just because the author/writer is dumb and can’t write good plots.
Yasser Queen
Revenge better be sweet!!! She and her family played you now it’s your turn to make them foolish!!!
Officialheatherrr
You know many people has fake personality that will ruin your life so why not be a villain and ruin there life too?
And why do you wanna be a hero to someone when they see you as a villain? Its meaningless and waste of time.
TruthSpeaker
So it wasn’t a parody… that’s depressing. The past doesn’t make any sense though. There is no way in hell that any 7 year old would be that crafty and patient. If Adeline herself isn’t a reincarnation or a reborn magician or a demon then it just doesn’t make any sense. Being jealous or whatever isn’t enough for people to act like that… I mean that sort of thing only happens in really REALLY poorly written stories. People said that this seemed to be a generic story… but even if it is, even then you have to at least have it make a LITTLE bit of sense. Even in “the villainess turns the hourglass” (trash story), at least the twist was that the author wanted to see if he could trick people into cheering for the absolute most horrid trash FL there was. He succeeded. But in this story the actual antagonist seems to not only be evil… it seems to be mindbogglingly stupid chaotic evil that does evil things simply for the lulz. Sure I mean you could write a story like that… but i you created such a character then any “revenge” would fall short because the antagonist would simply be too much of a lunatic and psycho to actually be affected by any normal revenge. IN fact, a psycho character like that would simply laugh even if you tortured it and killed people that it had seemingly cared about… because it would just be evil. I mean, sure if you want to write that kind of story it could actually be pretty interesting if we are shown Winsty doing all these elaborate plans to make Adelina suffer only for the antagonist to turn the tables on her and be even more evil. Not that it is going to happen… having read this second chapter it seems more likely that it is all just because the writer is incompetent.
Jupii
Ehe this looks cool
cronchytoe
periodd
Siesta
Yesssss
And idk how the evil sister did such things to our fl ever since she was a kid.. like is she a natural born evil?
TruthSpeaker
If she was then she would be a complete psycho that would make characters such as Hannibal Lector” seem tame… any and all planned revenge against her would fall short and blow up in Winsty’s face… and that alone would be refreshing since the whole tired “lets get revenge on the antagonist” plot would be subverted. But no… having only read these first two chapters my guess it is just because the author/writer is dumb and can’t write good plots.
wtfbijj
YES BE THE BIJJ WE NEEDED. And let that garbage taste her own poison. pls pls pls dont give us a knight shinning in armor.
Sharaa
Yessss