So… this is how we do stories now? Im thankful to the artist, and the writer, for an entertaining read, but…
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Last I checked, when you set up conflict, and problems, and, you know, STORY and PLOT, you don’t usually wrap it up within a single chapter where you exposition about how the past 30+ chapters resolved via an ‘after-the-fact’ epilogue. This felt… incredibly unsatisfying, and had zero impact or payoff when we didn’t actually get to see any of it happen.
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In other words, it feels rushed, like the authors just wanted to get it over with, and start on something new. They covered more in this chapter alone than they did in the previous 10-20, you know what I mean? This could have easily been an entire story arc, not just a – “Oh, and I guess they finally all worked together and won and had a happy ending ok bye!”
Kyosumari
So… this is how we do stories now? Im thankful to the artist, and the writer, for an entertaining read, but…
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Last I checked, when you set up conflict, and problems, and, you know, STORY and PLOT, you don’t usually wrap it up within a single chapter where you exposition about how the past 30+ chapters resolved via an ‘after-the-fact’ epilogue. This felt… incredibly unsatisfying, and had zero impact or payoff when we didn’t actually get to see any of it happen.
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In other words, it feels rushed, like the authors just wanted to get it over with, and start on something new. They covered more in this chapter alone than they did in the previous 10-20, you know what I mean? This could have easily been an entire story arc, not just a – “Oh, and I guess they finally all worked together and won and had a happy ending ok bye!”
Pythus
They could have made the final fight against carnis or whatever longer it was about 1 chapter long and ended very quickly but it was good nonetheless
SenmiMsS
Damn, this one was short.
But I like that. No pointless dragging the story.
Minouchaa
Thnk you for your hard woooooork
RavenSchofield
Huh , 😅 too fast
I like the story the Art
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It’s really good and easy to understand
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Thank you for your hard work Author 🙏
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Finally happy ending 🎉😍🥰
Sisihappy
It felt anti climatic and definitely rushed
Was it just me?
Edwin2099
Damn, already?
This sucks