The weakness of this story is forced plot. She storms into a stockholders meeting having no power or affiliation that anyone really knows about which isn’t likely. Everyone always being in the right place and the right time for misunderstandings, secret meetings, plot reveals, etc. It’s not good on a writing level. The slow reveals were good and it was proving to be interesting from a writing standpoint, but now its all plot convinience.
Ayameshimitsu
The weakness of this story is forced plot. She storms into a stockholders meeting having no power or affiliation that anyone really knows about which isn’t likely. Everyone always being in the right place and the right time for misunderstandings, secret meetings, plot reveals, etc. It’s not good on a writing level. The slow reveals were good and it was proving to be interesting from a writing standpoint, but now its all plot convinience.
I like the drama
There she is to save the day again for some reason