between the minor grammatical errors, and her cringy narration, its not off to a good start. But it does have potential. I feel like the author should have done a better job in explaining what her skill does. Furthermore, maybe i misunderstood due to the translation quality, but i assumed she wanted to lay low. Yet she overpowers it quickly. Another thing that annoys me, is when an MC will make a comment about how insanely difficult a monster is, yet proceeds to defeat it easily, as if the author wanted to ‘show off’ how op their character is.
MrBojingo
between the minor grammatical errors, and her cringy narration, its not off to a good start. But it does have potential. I feel like the author should have done a better job in explaining what her skill does. Furthermore, maybe i misunderstood due to the translation quality, but i assumed she wanted to lay low. Yet she overpowers it quickly. Another thing that annoys me, is when an MC will make a comment about how insanely difficult a monster is, yet proceeds to defeat it easily, as if the author wanted to ‘show off’ how op their character is.
TheReader. 25
So far passable
Kiryonn
a bit sloppy, but not a bad start either.
Gmfthefirst
This was pretty good.