Mightiest Melee Magician

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1. Eraj57

   This story has potential. but it’s pity that it’s written by a immature kid. except mc and some of his friends,all the others are bad people. They don’t even know when to retreat.and only knows how to bully people.author doesn’t even know how a human mind works. I mean how can this dumb villain became powerful magician. When the only think they can do is to make a worried face and trash talk. Even that king of magician. judging by his character he should have been killed or arrested already who only knows how to behave like I should be the best of the best. I should be the centre of everything. What the hell bro .plz don’t read this. At first u will like it. But later u will understand how immature that writer is who doesn’t know how to run a story

   March 25, 2024 at 3:41 pm

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2. Eraj57

   The has potential. but it’s pity that it’s written by a immature kid. except mc and some of his friends,all the others are bad people. They don’t even know when to retreat.and only knows how bully people.author doesn’t even know how a human mind works. I mean how can this dumb villain became powerful magician. When the only think they can do is to make a worried face and trash talk. Even that king of magician. judging by his character he should have been killed or arrested already who only knows how behave like I should be the best of the best. I should be the centre of everything. What the hell bro .plz don’t read this. At u will like it. But later u will understand how immature that writer is who doesn’t know how to run a story

   March 25, 2024 at 3:38 pm

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