look, cmon I’ll just put my opinion here, just some thoughts, nothing serious!
I really like this plot, it’s really interesting, but the writing is kinda… idk, we are on chapter 12, and I feel like too much have happened and little development have been made. its been, idk, 1 week? all these things already happened, I feel like with all of this, fl should have had a better development or decided what she is actually going to do. “oh, but its been 1 week, shes scared, too much have happened”, yes, and thats why she needs to act fast and think fast, she just have TWO persons on her side, and like the aunt said, she sounds like she is not sure, so she has to decide what she wants and how she will live.
I could write more about it, but im lazy, so thats it
softyhwrt
look, cmon I’ll just put my opinion here, just some thoughts, nothing serious!
I really like this plot, it’s really interesting, but the writing is kinda… idk, we are on chapter 12, and I feel like too much have happened and little development have been made. its been, idk, 1 week? all these things already happened, I feel like with all of this, fl should have had a better development or decided what she is actually going to do. “oh, but its been 1 week, shes scared, too much have happened”, yes, and thats why she needs to act fast and think fast, she just have TWO persons on her side, and like the aunt said, she sounds like she is not sure, so she has to decide what she wants and how she will live.
I could write more about it, but im lazy, so thats it